Travelling is one of the best ways to spend holiday time and I believe that every people have their own way to spend their time. I think both ways is the best as they feel comfortable. In this essay I’ll be discussing both types of visitor or traveler then I’ll conclude a decision.
Firstly, the person who prefers to spend their holidays in a resort might be thinking that holiday is to have relaxed rather than traveling around and knowing the people, it is better to have a trip in a managed way. So, there would not any tension of arranging the required material or vain of searching the different stuff. In the resort, people can found everything managed and you can visit without tension.
In other hands, the people who think it is better to travel around and knowing their custom and tradition is the best way to have a good time rather than just spending time on visiting and see the scene. Through this, they can know each other and exchange their culture, which is good as a traveler because this is the things increase your knowledge. But one thing I believe that where ever you visit it is most necessary to send you a good time and fresh your mind.
In conclusion, I think both ways of traveling are the best because it depends on our mindset and how would you like to spend your precious time and money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... about both type of visitor or traveler then I'll conclude a decision. Firstly...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
...ght be thinking that holiday is to have relax rather than travelling around and knowi...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one thing', 'a thing', or simply 'things'?
Suggestion: one thing; a thing; things
...the things increase your knowledge. But one things I believe that where ever you visit it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, then, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57805907173 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27514993258 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510548523207 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9895640336 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235151441034 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923543434497 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626322109428 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139570493912 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500020778292 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.5310837438 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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