Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently, making different changes in lives has been the subject of debate in several societies. Although there are advantages to making thing different, I totally believe that doing the same thing and keeping the things unchanged is better.
On the one hand, many commentators are of the view that making different changes in life could be beneficial in life. From their point of view, changes could bring diversity to our lives, because it is a matter of humanity and almost all the creatures like it. It is also maintained that due to the fact that our world is changing very fast, the individuals who protect themselves from changing cannot live in the global village. Also, it is asserted that diversity is the flavor of life and it means everything
On the other hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that keeping their way straight is more advantageous for them. They argue that making changes in life need excess amount energy and fund. Since the technology is advancing in today`s world, they find themselves more unable to be flexible which is mostly due to their inability to learn the new knowledges.
In my personal experience, making changes would not be easy to reach. I surely believe that it needs a lot of energy and time to spend on these moves and anybody cannot undertake them. According to a recent extensive research conducted by a professional team of great lecturers and talented exceptional undergraduates of Isfahan University of Technology (IUT), people who make their conditions stable, live longer.
In conclusion, both bringing diversity to life and keeping it unchanged would be beneficial under certain circumstances. But, I prefer protecting my life from any change due to the fact that it needs a lot of time and energy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99663299663 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75242588809 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4732537446 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.25397266985 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172652474581 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603397237941 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481429811379 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984295392867 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565623003203 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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