Some people spend too much time on work than their personal/private life and experience time shortage. What problems does it cause.
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the shortage of time in personal lives. Some people think that extended work hours spent at office have resulted in lack of leisure time in personal lives while others maintain that spending extra time at office has lesser odds. This essay will discuss the drawbacks of spending too much time at work places.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments associated with extensive work hours spent at office. Firstly, the most conspicuous is that people with the fear of getting fired, work day in and day out and that too for extended hours which subsequently results in lack of spare time in their private lives. For instance, some bosses are so demanding that employees have to work beyond their limits to meet the demands. As a result, this scenario not only deteriorates their health but also reduces the amount of leisure time in their personal lives.
On the other hand, people in favour of spending extensive hours at work places are not cognizant with the fatigue factor and mental pressure induced. Additionally, work can be efficiently managed during office hours if extra chit chat and wastage of time is avoided. As an example, a recent study has revealed that nowadays, maximum cardiac diseases pertain to excessive stress induced to work places and lack of leisure time in private lives. As a matter of fact, leisure time in personal lives not only reduces the stress but also abstain’s an individual from heart diseases.
To recapitulate, aforementioned discussion propounds the view that extensive hours spent at work places to arrest the fear of getting fired makes an individual prone to extreme stress and hazardous diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06993006993 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56378362077 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51048951049 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8809246471 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294188774091 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119283669567 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063436071967 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181123345995 0.151781067708 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997113024113 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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