Some people spend too much time on work than their personal/private life and experience time shortage. What problems does it cause.
Excessive time spent by the people at work places deeply influences their private life. Some people think that spending too much time at office area results in lack of time and disruption of personal life, while others maintain that owing to increasing demand of employers its better to spend maximum time at work place. This essay will discuss that how spending excessive time at office results in shortage of time and hampers the personal lives.
At the outset, there are myriad of agruments associated with the odds of spending too much time at office. The most conspicuous is that employers over burden their employees with excessives tasks. As a result, employees with the fear of getting fired work day in and day out to meet the demands of their bosses. As a matter of fact, it is evident that high demands by the employers overdose employees and result in lack and shortage of time.
On the other hand, people involved in high demanding sectors need to priortize their official commitments. Firstly, employees need to concentrate on their respective tasks and should not waste time during office timings. This would not only increase their productivity and efficiency but also allow to create more free time slot. For instance, people employed in job sectors like police, military and air traffic controlling need to prioritze their requriements to lead a healthy life. Hence, by adhereing to good management rules more time slots for personal life can be created.
To recapitulate, foregoing discussion propounds that the excessive tasks loaded by employees can be managed by prioritization and following good management principles which would ential in more leisure time in personal life of an individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'creating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: creating
...ductivity and efficiency but also allow to create more free time slot. For instance, peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, while, for instance, in short, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 31.9359605911 153% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16785714286 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67469004498 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3308371796 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355656439836 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133271248484 0.0925447433944 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900634652674 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208006848907 0.151781067708 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11483349024 0.0609392437508 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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