Some people suggest that each family should only have a car and encourage alternative vehicle. Do you agree or disagree?
In this days and age, it is suggested that a car is enough for each family and the alternative vehicle should be encouraged. The personal cars are the cause of the many issues for the environment. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this opinion.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support encourage alternative vehicle instead of using the personal car. At first, although traveling with the personal car may be more comfortable for some people, the cars are one of the factors to environmental pollutions.
The main factor is air pollution and it is really sensible in megacities. For example, the cars produce greenhouse gases that are the cause of climate change and global warming.
In addition, some people think they can get to their destination sooner than the vehicle, but this idea is wrong. more car in the street is equal to heavy traffic. In fact, travel by public transport like Metro is faster than travel by car. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by TNM University researchers in 2016 shows that a significant number of people waste their time every day behind the heavy traffics and buzzy streets or highways.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, my personal sentiment is that the advantages of public transportation are more convenience and outweighed of family cars are the cause of environmental problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03375527426 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82245367114 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586497890295 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5471779431 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205709043695 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731710900415 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063849729536 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100427277126 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530145463229 0.0609392437508 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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