Nowadays, families in urban areas have a few cars parked in their garage. Now people like to maintain more than one vehicles as it has become a status symbol. Show off significantly more than a necessity. They need different cars for different purposes like one for the city, another for highway, etc. There are both positives and negatives to having one car in a family.
One of the benefits of having less or only one car is that it will save you big bucks.Money saved can be channelised into more important things. Buying and maintaining a vehicle is a huge responsibility and should be done with utmost care as it can make you bankrupt. Having only a single car will also go a long way in saving the environment as more vehicles on the road equals to more pollution which is harmful to nature. Fewer cars will also reduce the dependency of you being driven around in your car without moving any muscles. You will be able to get more active physically and be fit.
The negatives of one family car will be sharing transport with others. It can be inconvenient and hectic for most people. You also have to rely on others to get you from one place to another which can be annoying most of the times. But efficient public transport reduces the dependency on your cars which can go a long way in the overall growth of the nations per se. For instance, there was a person who faced substantial financial troubles as he put most of his income on buying and maintain his cars which is a significant setback for him financially.
Therefore, in my opinion, a family should not keep more than one car in their garage. It is the call of the hour to save the ever depleting environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one vehicle', 'a vehicle', or simply 'vehicles'?
Suggestion: one vehicle; a vehicle; vehicles
.... Now people like to maintain more than one vehicles as it has become a status symbol. Show ...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Money
... car is that it will save you big bucks.Money saved can be channelised into more impo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 305.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52786885246 5.00649968141 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58254534251 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9284678036 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2352941176 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206321323758 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758064886054 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055172517977 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135233554025 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211716380816 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.5310837438 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 56.0 Out of 90
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