Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Crime, a term which in itself signifies many immoral and heinous acts, and deem as a blot for the civilized nation and society. However, some hold the view that crime can be curtailed effectively by longer prison sentence, while others are against it. Now, I am going to deliberate my views over this statement.
To begin with, every crime needs a specific punishment, which induces a fear in the mind of culprits, therefore prison sentence can be proved viable on account of plethora reasons. Firstly, it makes a criminal to repent for the brutal acts, as a result sometimes it can help some criminals in changing themselves whereby they can later lead a happy life, as crime is the result of uncontrolled situations. On the top of that, this sentence is imperative in making people to be not indulged in any immoral activity, by taking any law lax manner.
On the other hand, latter view can be supported by taking manifold points into consideration. Firstly, prison sentence for minor incident can be proved as an injustice and unfair because punishment should be decide as per the intensity of a crime. Furthermore, a prison sentence may even become a cause of life obliteration, which is an erroneous. In addition, restriction on the movement of people, who unfortunately bog down themselves in crime related activities can be proved better, as one may become sensible and aware about the aftermath of committing crime. Moreover, here government can play a vital role by awaring people regarding the outcomes of crime which in turn can result dramatic decline in crime rate.
In conclusion, I concede that there should not be any leniency over the matter of crime, as it destroys an ambience of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08303249097 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77098800773 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.159144995 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 104.977214359 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.25397266985 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186736105362 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699498069659 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430110389504 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11304109832 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435711491053 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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