Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind the bars.
To what extent do you agree?
Laws against criminals have become tougher with that said, the crime rate has also
increased. As a result, criminals are getting extended prison sentences, which in
my opinion is not the correct way to deal with. this essay will argue that
rather increasing the prison sentences we can use the alternative ways to reduce
the crime rate.
Extended prison sentence can have a adverse impact on a criminals mind. With an
extended jail term he may either fall into depression or start thinking about ways to
take revenge. this kind of situation can be avoided by applying alternative ways
towards the well being of a prisoner.
Rehabilitation programs inside jails have always been a success. Recently lot of
jail authorities have started coming up with youth programs, cultural events and
mental health programs. this helps a criminal who is also a human being to
become part of something which connects them to the outside world. With these
programmes they try to come back into their original self.
this essay argued that prison sentence does not bring any improvement on a
criminal's activities whereas connecting them to outside world using well being programmes
do make a difference. In the end, we can conclusively say that criminals should be given
chance for improvement using alternative ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, whereas, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23831775701 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66353910474 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654205607477 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9951168149 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4166666667 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.12807881773 412% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.33497536946 206% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105746979618 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394001508345 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406252854081 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0366226781073 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441449647468 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.