The idea of going overseas for a university degree is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.
studying at university is an option for many people, but the question is
where. sometimes studying at an overseas university seems a better
option than taking the same course at a home university. This essay will
argue that while studying overseas may be problematic, it is the best
option for many.
Experiencing an overseas university requires the ability to survive a new
culture and language. By successfully negotiating the challenges of life
in a new country a student can mature and grow. For example, gaining
a qualification also requires the ability to develop social skills, living
skills and sometimes supporting ourselves by working. These
challenges all benefit the student who studies overseas.
studying at home can be less expensive than studying overseas while
receiving the same qualification. university fees are generally cheaper
at home than for international students. For example, international
student fees can sometimes run into the tens of thousands of dollars,
whereas a similar university course in a hometown can be significantly
less expensive. The cost of education and living expenses is a big
consideration when deciding which university is best.
This essay has argued that an overseas university can provide lifechanging
experiences but can also be a very expensive way to be
educated. In my opinion, the long-term benefits of studying at an
overseas university outweigh the financial outlay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60810810811 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15089043652 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536036036036 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6081781044 50.4703680194 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7692307692 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.25397266985 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.12807881773 509% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270548645949 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109646186559 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581598994811 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808987325298 0.151781067708 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697722331043 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 11.5310837438 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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