Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree?
State your opinion and support it with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
The discussion on dangerous sports is a debatable one and each side has its logical arguments. I believe that dangerous games has had more negative results on the society than positive. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the arguments.
On the one hand, critics may point out that one of the most significant benefit of dangerous games is making the people to away from fear and scare. For example, it would create a human beings with brave and makes optimistic manners in their mind.
On the other hand, in spite of these arguments, dangerous sports has negative consequences in various ways. Firstly, it would kill the people in various ways and destroy the future dreams of the mankind. Secondly, it doesn\'t have any safety and health system and it has lot of risk for themselves and others. It is very significant in the human life that some one is dying because of the silly and dangerous games.
Lastly, in my opinion, the government should implement strong rule to ban these dangerous games in the country to safe the citizens from such useless games.
Taking these points into consideration, from a personal perspective, without a shadow of a doubt, I conclude that the game should have safety and healthy for the human beings instead of creating problems in the family, society and world. It could encourage the mankind in the happiest, splendid and tremendous prosperity of life in the earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
...e. For example, it would create a human beings with brave and makes optimistic manners...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...very significant in the human life that some one is dying because of the silly and dange...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83467741935 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57102225526 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1368819377 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143547007985 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484438001796 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363434613019 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789423224713 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270247817923 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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