Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable. What are the advantage and disadvantages of both places?
The environment and surroundings where children raise play keys role in making their career. While some people present an argument that children those who belong from the urban area have myriad of advantage, on the other hand, those who grew up in the rural area have a very limited number of facilities. This essay will cover both the sides pros and cons of pupil those who come from the city and the countryside.
To begin with, The Urban area provides better access to an education system to the children. Since most of the big universities, schools, and libraries are located nearby distance children can easily go to school or libraries hassle-free. On the downside, The children who are leaving in cities are being prone to the disease because of the high-density population and additionally tremendous amount of pollution because of factories and vehicles to which these small lives are exposed to it.
On the other hand, Children who are leaving in rural areas have one of the prominent advantages is that they live near nature and landscape. Hence, It helps them to be fit and give them positive energy in their life. But every coin has two sides so those who live in the countryside they have to face problem in their education system and access to the basic necessity in their life. Because the government does not encourage to build basic infrastructure to the village side.
In a nutshell, Both rural and urban life present advantages and disadvantages. It's would our society and government responsibility that they will come together and overcome all the difficulties of children who are facing it at both places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 11, column 427, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'building'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: building
...cause the government does not encourage to build basic infrastructure to the village sid...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e present advantages and disadvantages. Its would our society and government respon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 275.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98545454545 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70671036347 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6026403786 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144026781086 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526793234144 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378909650668 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881733333811 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223967046555 0.0609392437508 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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