Some people think that it would be better for large companies and
industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres.
Others believe that companies and industries should remain in
more urban areas.
Choose which position you most agree with and discuss why you
chose that position. Support your point of view with details from
your own experiences, observations or reading.
Cities are growing and so are regional centres due to expanding populations and the need for places for people to work and live. Some people think that companies and industries should move to regional centres while others think that they should remain in the cities. I believe that the best idea is for regional areas to be developed and that companies and industries should move out of the cities.
A move by companies and industries to regional areas will take some of the working city population with them. This has the advantage of relievingcity overcrowding and the pressure on the infrastructure that is already stressed. For example, taking manufacturing plants to regional areas creates work and encourages families to live and work in these centres. In my mind, relieving the crowding in cities is a sensible and practical solution to many urban issues.
To reduce pollution and keep cities cleaner and healthier it is a good idea to encourage companies to move and operate in regional areas. Traditionally, many industries and companies set up business headquarters in the city, but as time has changed the need to be city based has diminished. For example, car-manufacturing plants no longer need to be based in urban areas, and are able to relocate to well supported regional areas taking with them associated pollution problems. For a healthier city it is good that industry and companies move outside of the city.
This essay has argued that moving companies and industry to regional areas may be practical and create healthier cities. In my opinion, relocating companies to these developing regional areas will benefit those who work for these businesses and the cities that they leave behind.
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing, is this a curse or blessing? 61
- Some people think that it would be better for large companies andindustry to move to regional areas outside large urban centres.Others believe that companies and industries should remain inmore urban areas.Choose which position you most agree with and dis 72
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing, is this a curse or blessing? 61
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing, is this a curse or blessing? 61
- Do you think the significance of English language as an international language will be lost with globalisation or its significance will increase with globalisation? What is your opinion? 65
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... industries to regional areas will take some of the working city population with them. This...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 281.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12099644128 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84884724921 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462633451957 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7608681535 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340495344691 0.242375264174 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142079397905 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848245959256 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225535179753 0.151781067708 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615656601433 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.