Some people believe that having advertisements for public schools will have a benefit like receiving funding from advertising companies whereas others regard it as exploitation that children might become a captive object for those sponsors. I am going to discuss both agreements and give my personal opinion in the following essay.
Funding schools by placing advertisements from sponsors has become more popular because public schools have very limited funding from the government. Schools can develop more programmes and activities for children if they can receive more funding. Therefore, placing advertisements becomes one of the great resources of collecting funding. Without efficient funding, schools are not able to expand their curricular activities or more programmes for children's learning.
However, some people think that placing advertisements could cause some problem as children might be treated as a captive audience in this environment. They might not be able to understand what advertisements try to express but absorb it unconsciously. For example, when children see an advertisement for soft drinks in their daily school life they might consider it is good to drink without thinking further regarding a health issue.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that lack funding for expansion or developing more activities for their children. With efficient funding, schools can make their programmes more diverse and help their children's learning.
- Education system that assess the student's learning by written exam is correct? Discuss your view? 72
- Communication has changed significantly in the last 10 years. Discuss pros and cons of this change. Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience 77
- Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additionally funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.Choose which position you most a 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73913043478 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01365512331 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578260869565 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8815987091 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419398090007 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165516521661 0.0925447433944 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101406827072 0.071462118173 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265240210146 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155469770881 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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