The way people communicate has changed noticeably in the past decade. These changes not only bring people great advantages but also disadvantages. The following essay I am going to share my personal experience and discuss some positive aspects as well as negative ones of the changes.
To start with, due to this changing, people’s living styles are affected by many benefits and drawbacks. For example, thanks to the video chat, people now more easily communicate with their family and friends while they are in different countries or far away from each other. Through the video call, they can face to face talking to each other. Moreover, people now can send a message by email instead of going to the post office, which saves them great time and money as well.
However, some people do not use communication facilities properly. They are spending too much time on the communication tools for example, mobile phone, then become addicted to them, which resulted in people getting away from community gradually. Therefore, we now can usually see people getting together in a restaurant but they are all engaged in their phones ignoring who they are being with. That might have negative aspects for a relationship that people are having less real personal contact from their family or friends.
In conclusion, while there are several arguments on the positive and negative aspects of the changes that happened in the relationship, my opinion is that the changes are beneficial for human unless people are addicted to the communication devices and using them too much.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12790697674 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66421207113 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.623538786 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.25397266985 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099363267174 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417273384082 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256971510083 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068171248385 0.151781067708 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155606013921 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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