Some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future workforce and make good members of society. Others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. What is your opinion?.
Recently, the concepts of some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future and its corresponding impacts have a heated debate. Although believed by that the matters of others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfilment is highly beneficial, such issues is regarded thoroughly negative and positive by substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that different different opinion can be a plus, and i will narrate that throughout further discussion.
To commence with, can handy with the society with noticeable effects, which are rooted in the fact that the merits of some people work force and education both have make good members of society, as well as, depend to self think are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience as well as stated by many conducted a social experiment which illustrate educations and work loads ,thus, it can be considered nothing less than a boon for us.
However, in the eon of advancement, education and worked are do the good members might increase the consequences of personality moreover, fundamental aspect of think and knowledge could relate to this reality that the drawbacks of different opinion pertain to a workforce and education to cite an example, some drawn survey undertaken by a prestigious body has asserted that down side of people thinking is bound to negatively with education related. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of propels arguments depends in all situations.
To conclude , the workforce and education to prepare in future make good members while there are several compelling arguments on both side. i duly believe that the pros of education thinking to propels far outweigh its con, Not only the advantage of sepretary opinions proves it significance in real life, but also overshadows the trivial negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2474916388 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95193157102 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588628762542 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.1898043347 50.4703680194 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.333333333 104.977214359 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2222222222 20.9669160288 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447563427155 0.242375264174 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163792402701 0.0925447433944 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114510297624 0.071462118173 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249953827866 0.151781067708 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629689573376 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 12.6369458128 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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