Some people think that technology improves the quality of life whereas others feel that creates new problems that threaten the quality of life. Discuss both these views and suggest your opinion?
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Talk about the pros/ cons of this era as is full of daily inventions.
In this day and age, technology have become an ongoing debate among public all around the world. Although technology era is regarded as throughly both constructive and positive by a considerable number of people, there are a number of people hold an opponent's view. I am inclined to higkly believe that technology is quite beneficial as it could improve the standard of living, create more complicated useful equipment and more faster means of transportations. Following paraghraphs will assert both sides and dilver appropriate conclusion.
on the one hand, there are several reasons why I welcome new technologies. First ond foremos is that technolohy can improve the standard of living globally, Fore example in recent years a huge number of kitchen appliances are created to help individual to do their home tasks. Secondly, technology can bring about revolutaion in transportation systems which is made the more convenientmovement from one country to another. Lastly, many thanks to technology, a large number of new and modern medical equipment are made that can help to doctors and scientists to find and treat uncurable deseases. Thus, there is no doubt that technologycan widen the horizen of people.
On the other hand, many people especially treditional one argued that, the drawback of technology is more than it's advantages. They believe that, new technology such as mobile phone has harmful radiation for users. In addition there are many sample that technology made lots of tragedy all around the world. For example, the Russian nuclear station cuase kill meny innocent people as a result of atomic research. Hence, in these people's views there is no benefit in technology.
To recapiculate, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that, although there are numerous reasons to not welcoming to new technology but the advantages on technology far outwigh of disadvantages.
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...her. Lastly, many thanks to technology, a large number of new and modern medical equipment are ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36789297659 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03185328078 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9026243331 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166084762128 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517727715452 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337753636461 0.071462118173 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101282606314 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258487155051 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.