Some people think traditional cultures should be strictly followed, while others think modern people should adopt a new way of life. What is your opinion?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that traditional cultures should be strictly followed. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this, and I will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that the masses consider that traditional cultures for modern people's lives, such as a new way of life, fashion, cars, mobile, social media, modern society, and technology can not only contribute to communication and video call but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility and dedication. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of traditional cultures for a new way of life.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that traditional cultures are indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ll only lead to a myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 221.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74661006209 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0971468749 50.4703680194 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198782232449 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697133991937 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855615524796 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109815897768 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381271805251 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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