Some people think that women generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive To what extent you agree with this

In the sophisticated era,nowadays women are equal work compare to the men. women have very obligation,diligent and very good nature.Female should be control all the every situation good or bad. I am agree with this statement.There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.

Gone on the days, today's women are equal participation in all the profession .For instance, doctor, police officer, political line, teacher,fashion design,nurse, business and actor etc.women play a vital role in the human being.Therefore, ladies have umpteen responsibility because it they have a lots work in their life like housewife, mother,daughter, good employee good society women. After that, women are all supporting to social news.As far as, female have active in society site.But also, they should be helping to the citizens problem they have every to all time.

Nevertheless,women have very kind hard and peaceful rather than men. Men always like introvert in himself and they could not involve social problem like crime in any colony men could not be impact on their life.Moreover,they always enjoy the indoors activity.For instance, Watching television, playing games indoors and according to me, they should not be interesting to all work.otherwise,they always like alone in himself.last but not the least,I think that, women have very polite by nature and they always decide all working doing best in their life. Women have plethora obligation in their life.As well as,they do not loose her temper in their situation .

In summarize, after analyzing that issue reckon,In my mind, women have a lots of will power they handle all the every situation like bad or good.women always supporting to all work.I thing,women have backbone in the men life because they have cause like women are honest, kind heart and she do not loose her temper in any situation and they have very quiet in their life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 20.9802955665 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 309.0 242.827586207 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25889967638 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15727361674 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537216828479 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.563462205 50.4703680194 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.5 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9 20.9669160288 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.25397266985 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.33497536946 619% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118570317373 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665706367612 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493874310973 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824362073846 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285374322067 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 12.6369458128 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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