Some people think that women generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive.To what extent you agree with this?
In the sophisticated era,nowadays womens are equal work compare to the men. women have very obligation,diligent and very good nature.Female should be control all the every situation good or bad. I am agree with this statement.There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
Gone on the days,todays women are equal participation in all the profession .For instance,docter,ploice officer,plotical line, teacher,fashion design,nurse, business and actor etc.women play a vital role in the human being.Therefore, ladies have umpteen responsibilty because it they have alots work in their life like homewife, mother,daughter, good employee good society women. Afterthat, women are all supporting to social news.As far as, female have active in society site.But also, they should be helping to the citizens problem they have every to all time.
Nevertheless,women have very kind hard and peaceful rathan than men. Men always like introvert in himself and they could not involve social problem like crime in any colony men could not be impact un their life.Moreover,they always enjoy the indoors activity.For instance, Watching television, playing games indoors and according to me, they should not be interesting to all work.otherwise,they always like alone in himself.last but not the least,I think that, women have very polite by nature and they always deciade all working doing best in their life. Women have plethore obligation in their life.As well as,they do not loose her temper in their situation .
In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon,In my mind, womens have alots of will power they handle all the every situation like bad or good.women always supporting to all work.I thing,women have blackbone in the men life because they have cause like women have ver honest ,kind heart and she do not loose her temper in any situation and they have very quiet in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3795379538 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3660494838 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.535663609 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.0 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117410967148 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662049577064 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493770914009 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814918159918 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289069886843 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.