The table below shows the sales at a departmental store Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below shows the sales at a departmental store. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tabular demonstrates that information of representation the sales at a departmental store. It is six categories of the fast food.

Having a quick glance in the illustration, pizza demand is very higher in the chart. All people like the pizza.Hence, in may-june mostly people investment dollars in the pizza and after few monthly in september-octocber it is pizza demaned income day by day. Afterthat, second most upsurge in burger sales in dollars most dweller like it . It is very famous all groups popular demand burger.

On the flip side, fish and fruits are nearly by equal in september-octocber fish dollars in 3700 and fruits dollars in 3500.Finally,soft drinks is popular in june -july plethore people like the soft drinks but after month was decline in the rate to the soft drinks in 3500. Therefore, oats is same price in the monthly in may-october are equal money sales in dollars

To sum up, the famous fast food is pizza and burger in any month. All the people like oats .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence
...in the chart. All people like the pizza.Hence, in may-june mostly people investment d...
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...er sales in dollars most dweller like it . It is very famous all groups popular de...
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...lars in 3700 and fruits dollars in 3500.Finally,soft drinks is popular in june -july pl...
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... 3700 and fruits dollars in 3500.Finally,soft drinks is popular in june -july plethor...
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...money sales in dollars To sum up, the famous fast food is pizza and burger in ...
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...r in any month. All the people like oats .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, may, second, so, therefore, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89349112426 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03646770282 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532544378698 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.1191645913 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0580355994517 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384378394625 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872343751782 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609049162138 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892053389274 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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