Some people think women should be given equal changes to work excel in their careers. Others believe that a women’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in women careers. there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
there are number of the arguments in favuor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that women careers can not only contribute to women careers but also lead to a numerous other benefits is various field. Thanks to the wide range advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one is good stead, as far arguments their changes of prosperity and excellence concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that its only likely to helps are thrive and excel in varied areas besides, only when one follows, such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication as perseverance. Hence, its is apparent why many are in favour of women careers.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits women careers are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03587443946 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86600063876 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578475336323 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9520965159 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.3 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149105362899 0.242375264174 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062236340559 0.0925447433944 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396795574884 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839495555957 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268369025416 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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