some people thinks law changes human behavior? do you agree with it.
Today, law is there for everything. Law helps to regulate and keep check on everything. Law actually differentiate human from other animals, thus human is known as homo-sapiens. I believe law is the necessary evil and it does brings change to human behavior. In the essay, we will analyze how law inculcates obedience and responsibility in human behavior.
Firstly, law helps to restrict human behavior and motivates them to be obedient. Take traffic rules for instance, fines are levied for jumping red lights and traffic violation. This example clearly shows that the fear of penalty lead to obedience in human behavior, thus following traffic rules. It is obvious that law changes human behavior.
Moreover, law brings out responsibility in people. For example, rules of corporal punishment, ban on alcohol in public places, duty to environment. These rules clearly examplefies how it develops responsibility in human behavior. As without these laws, human being would be more animalistic, thus law changes human behavior.
On analyzing the above reason, it is clear that law helps people being obedient and responsible. Therefore, it can be concluded that law has effect on human behavior. It is recommended that law should be enacted and human should follow those rules to make the world peaceful and friendly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89796628979 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2653785 50.4703680194 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6875 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29251764806 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126793272751 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903072309225 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203639111539 0.151781067708 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324658804928 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 12.6369458128 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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