Achieving success these days has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether hard working to reach success outweigh spending more free time or not?”. It is a widely held view that making an effort to acquire prosperity is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that on must weight up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that working long hours to achieve success plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that people will be able to increase their earning capacity as well as wealth to enjoy high living standard. Secondly, it can be argued that hard working provide individuals job security and they enjoy the sustainable profession. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that working endlessly brings others more fame and popularity. A group of socialists, working at a prestigious university conducted that an extensive range of successful scientists or businessmen could reach the prosperity summit by hard working.
However, there is no doubt that working without considering any spare time provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that such working causes a wide variety of disease, including psychological disorders or mental deprivation. Moreover, their families might be neglected as a result of hard working and make a sedentary society for themselves.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that appropriate circumstances must be taken into consideration to encourage people to work hard and achieve success. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...Achieving success these days has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34121621622 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02927153454 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7747248854 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.615384615 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.9669160288 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204483625289 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644267969674 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494512348272 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118329432955 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0049536914692 0.0609392437508 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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