Some say that in today’s world the value of humanities has been eclipsed by the necessity of preparing for specific wealth-producing careers, such as medicine. What is your opinion about a role in today’s changing world for study of the humanities?
ecently, the phenomenon of fading the value which humntities have and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of human sciences is highly beneficial, this issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that health workers promotions can be a plus. and I analyze that throuought this essay.
From a social standpoint, providing beds for pecial wealth-relaqted jobs can provide the society with some noticable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of medicin strategies and human relations, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic research which discovered modern hospitals. therefore beneficial ramifications of the world's changes apparently can be seen.
Whithin the real of science, benefits of humanities might increase the consequences of the social well-being. Moreover, fundamental aspects of humantities classrooms relate to this reality that getting ready for wealth-producing activities pertain to nursing importance. As a tangible example, a scientific experiment undertaken by a prestigious university has asseeted that the downsides of mental problems are correlated negatively with health strategies. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notions of humantites in societies.
In concolusion , although there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the advantages of humanities issues far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of establishing healt infrastructures prove the significance of helath systems, but also pinpoint health sciences impilcations .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.7568627451 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30648007064 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 255.0 20.5024630542 1244% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1468.0 104.977214359 1398% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 255.0 20.9669160288 1216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 63.0 7.25397266985 868% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111041599996 0.242375264174 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111041599996 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590024592244 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331120291697 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 133.2 12.6369458128 1054% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -204.27 53.1260098522 -385% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 105.1 10.9458128079 960% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.61 11.5310837438 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.91 8.32886699507 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 107.0 55.0591133005 194% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.94827586207 583% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 104.0 10.3980295567 1000% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.5123152709 552% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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