Some sports are considered extremely dangerous, but many people still like them. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Recently, the phenomenon of some sports are considered extremely dangerous, but many people still like them. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that dangerous sports can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, some sports can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in that crucial issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered current policies. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both this common phenomenon and accordingly complicated procedures apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of a public arena, dangerous sports might increase the consequences of critical needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of some dangerous sports far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint thorny issues' potential implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...o people take part in dangerous sports? and its corresponding impacts have sparked ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, so, still, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73858921162 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19776785495 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668049792531 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5180707891 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.384615385 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343589844501 0.242375264174 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122179008868 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172550046087 0.071462118173 241% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182491572156 0.151781067708 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13993944299 0.0609392437508 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.32886699507 127% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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