Some sports are considered extremely dangerous, but many people still like them. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.
Today, the steadily growing popularity of extreme sports has become a subject of considerable controversy. Majority of people consider them as unworthy of participation due to the high level of danger involved, while others believe that the risks can be minimized by taking certain measures. This essay will explore the reasons why people engage in such dangerous sports and propose appropriate solutions to mitigate the associated threats.
In general, any extreme sport requires activation and consolidation of all our senses for survival, which provokes our body to release adrenaline in order to keep us safe from danger. Consequently, the adrenaline flow stimulates the release of dopamine and endorphin, chemicals which are associated with feelings of pleasure and euphoria. That is why experienced extreme athletes for instance claim that it provides a real sense of being alive, let alone the fact that empowering your body in this way improves your balance, endurance, and muscle strength without any gym.
Furthermore, despite the life-threatening nature of these activities there are numerous ways to significantly reduce the level of risk. First and foremost, professional supervision is the key to complete safety. Whether it is snowboarding or surfing, people should be trained by experts, which requires unconditional adherence to rules and discipline. For example, skydivers spend hours practising every single move before jumping. Thus, working out the reaction to dangerous situations to automatism should be mandatory for risk takers of all levels. Besides, the use of proper safety gear and equipment such as helmets and protective clothing can greatly reduce the chance of injury.
In conclusion, even though some sports are extremely dangerous, many people still do them for various reasons. Nevertheless, the adequate professional training and the use of appropriate equipment mitigate the majority of threats related to extreme sports.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons to mitigate the associated threats. In general, any extreme sport requires a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63175675676 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01254188372 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7223676189 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276044086334 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785725964952 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888339493737 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165254381486 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910347765943 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons to mitigate the associated threats. In general, any extreme sport requires a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63175675676 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01254188372 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 139.433497537 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648648648649 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 379.143842365 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7223676189 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.071428571 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276044086334 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785725964952 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888339493737 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165254381486 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910347765943 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.