‘Governments should provide free healthcare to everyone in society.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
These days, the question of implementing free healthcare services for all citizens has become the subject of considerable controversy. Despite widely supported opinion that such a social influential concept could ensure the principle of equality in society and people's inherent right on healthy life, this essay will prove that providing any free of charge medical aid is too expensive and demanding for government budget, let alone impairment of the quality of provided services.
To begin with, the free healthcare system could have a remarkably detrimental impact on the overall socio and economic environment of the nation. Generally, these services are run by the government through payroll taxes you pay. Being extremely expensive, they can take up to 40% of state budget and consequently, lead to the shortage in other governmental amenities, such as education. Hence, the next step for authorities is unavoidable decision of increase the tax for everyone.
In addition, even though every citizen gets access to health care facilities it can noticeably degrade the quality of service provided instead. The number of patients will spike instantly once the health care services get free. Therefore, the doctors and nurses have to work day and night on a busy schedule. This means their goal changes into treating as many patients as possible rather than properly diagnosing them. As a result, the quality of service drastically reduces. Moreover, the free healthcare system makes hospitals busier and results in longer waiting period for your appointment.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that the concept of providing free medical service for everyone is potentially attractive, its detrimental consequences should not be neglected. I firmly believe that due to the high cost for society and the risk of the significant quality reduction governments should not implement it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1207.87684729 132% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42176870748 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88712804583 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646258503401 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6912257299 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.857142857 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169569809064 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493556759933 0.0925447433944 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425084485248 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977565648302 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207787555795 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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