Some types of employment are more suitable for men and other types of employment are more appropriate for women.
'To what extent do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and
examples from your own experience.
There are many controversial debates with the works that can be done by women and men. For the reason of physical power, some kind of jobs Such as mining and smithery are appropriate for men in opposite some of the employment are proper for the feminine mood like nursing and kindergarten coach. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss why I agree with this idea.
There are various reasons to divide jobs to the masculine or feminine. On the one hand and foremost, some of the employment is hard for women and out of their physical force because their body is delicate. Mine industry is one type of these difficult occupations, this industry needs to masculine power, even hard for men or occasionally is dangerous. For example, work in the coal mine, in addition to its hardness is seriously hazardous and have been many killed in all around the world every year.
On the other hand, some of the employment does not need to masculine force and maybe not suitable for men but kindness and feminine patience needed. For example, a recent scientific research conducted with Tehran University researchers in 2014 showed that a significant number of positions such as hospital nurses and kindergarten coaches taken by women.
In conclusion, there are several compelling reasons that make me sure to agree with the division of employment to masculine and feminine due to requirement some of them to more body force and others need to attention and kindness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91164658635 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68178084805 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9255041701 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.3 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318743171471 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122218557224 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059005195391 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196624418992 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555529303874 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.