The space travel is fantastic these days and people are very fascinated towards it but there are many environmental problems on our planet that need to be resolved first. What is your opinion? Should money be spent on space travel or on environmental issues?
Nowadays the space travel has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question” whether money should be spent on space or on environmental problems?”. It is a widely held view that m is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must be held the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that exploring and traveling on space plays a vital role in the world of cut-throat competition. Therefore, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that the scientists will be able to unfold the unsolved mystery. Secondly, since we are faced with over population in the earth so funding on space researches may help the astronomers to find the existence of life in other planets to address this crisis. In addition to this information, a group of astronomers, working at observatory conducted that by investing a large amount of money on space traveling the earth can be saved against the hit of other meteors.
However, there is no doubt that spending money on the space travel provides people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that an extensive range of areas, such as Africa are struggling poverty and suffer from famine and starvation, so it would be better to spend money for them. Moreover, the crisis of environmental pollution has endangered the health of a wide variety of people and wildlife, so the government should invest money in this fields.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that huge amount of money must be considered to find unsolved reality in the space. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95666666667 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89630224021 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8588528314 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308057706091 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100869300782 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722050986651 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175249169607 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591986241989 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.