The space travel is fantastic these days, and people are very fascinated towards it, but there are many environmental problems on our planet. What is your opinion? Should money be spent on space travel or environmental issues?
Space travel is very exciting, and give ways to explore the new world. But, the Earth has its own environmental issues. It would be more fruitful if the resources are spent on saving the Earth first. In this essay, will discuss why looking into our own planet’s problems is far important than the space travel.
Firstly, the Earth is burning because of pollution. According to United Nations reports, global warming and climate change is real. We cannot ignore our current problems. Climate change has created havoc all over the globe. Floods, droughts, ice melting are affecting humans, animals, plants. It is better to concentrate on our internal issues, rather than spending money on space travel.
Secondly, mostly under-developed and developing countries are sources of pollution. These countries don’t have means to finance eco-friendly solution to pollution causing problems. Money spent on such countries will help to devise better solution. It will help not only the developing but also developed countries as pollution is not confined to any geography.
In conclusion, money should be spent on fixing environmental issues rather than space travel. Space travel is for the happiness of riches, which can be better utilised for the planet. It is recommended that, environmental issues should be taken seriously and rich people should consider it as their social responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...give ways to explore the new world. But, the Earth has its own environmental issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45412844037 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85092757975 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619266055046 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6652660682 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.9411764706 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8235294118 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355492636878 0.242375264174 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956090355012 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107821679929 0.071462118173 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201523657258 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143518523081 0.0609392437508 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.44 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.94827586207 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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