These days there is an ongoing debate going on between people that whether money should be spend on space exploration or at the improvement of lives of poor people. Some people have a viewpoint that money should be held for betterment of the lives of poor people while others have contrary views. In my opinion, we should find the solutions of environmental issues irrespective of spending money on space travel. I shall explain my viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are myriad of conspicuous reasons o support the aforesaid notion .First and Foremost, Nations should use money to help poor people and control environmental degradation. Humans live in environment and it is at risk of getting destroyed. To give an illustration, a number of evidences from number of research asserted that in next 100 years, our environment will become worse to live. Therefore, it becomes indispensable to safeguard out environment.
Furthermore, money is always limited so it should be used wisely. It can also be taken into account that our home should come first then from left over money, space explorations can be done. Moreover, Space explorations require millions dollars which can be used to save hectares of land. Hence, it can be deduced that money should be spend first on saving the earth.
To capitulate, this essay discussed that saving our planet earth is much more important than spending hefty amounts in space travel. Therefore in my personal opinion, I would strongly recommend that money should be wisely used in protecting and solving the environmental problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18532818533 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86841146289 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598455598456 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3620155037 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9285714286 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37897409265 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127329677144 0.0925447433944 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832436673047 0.071462118173 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221376051461 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703511387779 0.0609392437508 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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