With the hefty amount of fees to be pain in school, we are governing a new phenomenon where students are working part time to attain extra penny. The phenomenon has some advantages and disadvantages attached to it. I would like to elucidate my perspectives in the later paragraphs.
It is an inevitable fact, that their are myriad number of students who are working par-time nowadays to earn extra income. Although, it is a grim matter of concern but, with the increase in the fees of colleges or universities students has to take study loans and to pay for loans they have to earn extra. This phenomenon does divert the students from their true pathway that is to study as in the extra time these students have to go to jobs rather than studying. These are some of the demerits of part-time jobs.
On the bright side, when students work part-time they are gaining the experience on working as a professionals, they are socializing and interacting which is preparing them for future jobs. Also, the money earned by part-time jobs are used for attending some extra-curriculum activities such as attending guitar classes or going to Gym.
Hence aforementioned, the foregoing discussion will propounds to the view that part-time jobs has equal amount of pros and cons. It makes students superlative and attentive and help them to understand the true value of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86573547224 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5670995671 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3055740646 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.727272727 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 7.25397266985 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319921263357 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118172566969 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611065970543 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192629792784 0.151781067708 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218611338855 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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