Success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy.To what extent do you agree with this definition of scuccess should take in to consideration?
one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy . There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy can not only contribute to wealthy society, but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes tobeing effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. needless to say, all these merits stand on ein good stead, as far as augmenting their chance of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned preposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and persevernce. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy.
in view of the arguments outline above, one can conclude that the benefit of success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy are indeed too great to ignore.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-01-04 | amolsharma44 | 77 | view |
| 2019-05-14 | Sundar | 11 | view |
- Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree? 56
- Personal Development is the base for professional development and advancing in one's career. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community? 77
- Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree? Discuss both option and give examples. 67
- The means of communicating in society today s has changed greatly over the last ten years Give your opinion 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
one of the most conspicuous trends of today...
^^^
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...’s society is measure in term of wealthy . There is a widespread worry that this w...
^^
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...will only lead to myriad of concerns in ones life. However, I do not entirely accept...
^^^^
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ever, I do not entirely accept this and i will explain why in this essay. There ...
^
Line 2, column 477, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Needless
...th much ease, efficacy and convenience. needless to say, all these merits stand on ein g...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...society is measure in term of wealthy. in view of the arguments outline above, on...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83969465649 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74126292093 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526717557252 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4169393021 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.272727273 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232512906031 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958843478688 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984784599375 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162103547942 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587850431502 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.