successful sports star and glamorous film stars are role model of youngsters. Do you support it or not?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals sports star and film star become a role model of today 's generation has become prominent topic in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analysis and explain. Regarding this, i partially agree with this statement and will elaborate in my further writing.
To begin with, these days, sports and film star have great demand in each and every place. They are influencer of myriad masses. By watching their movies, Youngster follows their lifestyle and learn plenty of things from them. Celebrities motivates to today's generation to work hard and become like them. Furthermore, follower also watch their movies and gain their knowledge because some movies related in reality and some are informative. Lastly, they also follow their clothing style, hair and so on.
On the contrary, it also has negative impact on individual’s life. To cite an example, majority of people have habit of drug by watching Sanjay Dutt movies which is harmful for them. Moreover, there are a lot of drink’s advertisement shown by stars with which youngster prefer drinks that is also caused their body.
To recapitulate, it can be cleared from above discussion is that celebrities are play a vital role for society. However, they put false thing in front of society which are unavoidable.
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...ecome a role model of today s generation has become prominent topic in the contem...
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...front of society which are unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, regarding, so, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15811965812 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76223462036 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645299145299 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4440826854 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4666666667 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136116821984 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387349526021 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823837621617 0.071462118173 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756125162344 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551131851058 0.0609392437508 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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