Successful sports stars and glamerous folm stars are a role model for youngsters do you support it or not? agree or disagree?
The effect of successful sports stars and glamerous film stars are role models for youngsters which has always debatable, but has now become more controversial. It can be agreed that the sports star and film stars are role model for youth. This essay will be eleborate how the sports star and film stars motivate children and will lead to logical conclusion.
There are numerous reasons why sport stars and celebrities are role models for youngsters because they achieve success and fame in country as well as in the world. All people loves them because of their struggle and their lifestyle. In addition youngsters follow the lifestyle of celebrities. They always try to copy their role.
Nevertheless, some masses opposing view and tend to believe that successful sport stars and celebrities are not good for role model for youth. There are numerous reasons for that but the most conspicuous one is that all youngsters are not follow the lifestyle of celebrities. They can't afford clothes and goods like celebrities. Furthermore it youngsters follow the celebrities they can't focus on their study.
At last, from what has been discussed above i think if youth follows the celebrities they easily get path of their life. They never confuse teenager because they have a goal of their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, well, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04205607477 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6110458605 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3577264663 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369698176539 0.242375264174 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143610268489 0.0925447433944 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159802789724 0.071462118173 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224226036702 0.151781067708 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16462071874 0.0609392437508 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 12.6369458128 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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