Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
In this Century, people are addicted to the media like cine, sports, music, dance etc. particularly youngsters of today generations are giving elixir to media. In this topic, they said contentious like sports star and the film stars are role model to the youngsters are not. It consists of myriad benefits and problems. I share my views in an upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with a positive approach, Media stars are giving motivation to the youngsters. They teach plethora social message to the youngsters. Because of this, many volunteers are involving themselves in social work like giving food to the orphanage during their celebration day, village cleaning process etc. In this generation, because of media, people will know the value of their other feelings.
Further reinforcing, the negative side of this is, Many youngsters are affected by the media stars. They spoils their life time because of doing some irritatable actions motivated by media. particularly youngsters of this generation wrongly get inspired by their dressing sense, drinking, etc. Inspired by some cine stars youngsters doing hogwash activity.
In conclusion, this topic should contentious, consist both negative and positive points. According to my view i agree with the media people are role model to the youngsters depending upon their personal aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44019138756 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75723489545 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0290186761 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 20.9669160288 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156216212345 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559305006711 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923075087017 0.071462118173 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987575279466 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403607184658 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.