Successful sportsstars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do u support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Sports personalities and film stars attract huge crowd where ever they go. People blindly follow them, so they are the role model for youngsters today. I am totally agree with the above statement. In this essay I will provide my reasons with suitable examples.
Firstly, in today's era of technology, celebrities maintain constant touch with their followers through social networking and mass media. Hence, youth follows them blindly as they are the style icon of young generation. For instance, today every superstar has social networking account so that he can share his views to his supporters. Therefore, technology plays major role to create huge fan base and celebrities behave like a role model where ever they go.
Secondly, people nowadays do not have their unique image and they also do not want to create that. Such behavior lead them to copy the lifestyle and fashion trends that celebrities and superstars follow. For instance, even if some of the starts are not popular outside their domain, still they have huge fan circle across different regions. Hence, it is quite easy for celebrities to add followers nowadays because of the mindset and lifestyle of youngsters.
In conclusion, celebrities are the role model for young generation and they should perform this role carefully to guide youngsters to right direction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...odel for youngsters today. I am totally agree with the above statement. In this essay...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...uperstars follow. For instance, even if some of the starts are not popular outside their do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21296296296 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61463841079 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6979944606 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6153846154 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174451002906 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603781875607 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518686581209 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116081927197 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369111849176 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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