Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?
A lot of technological advancements have been taken place day by day, and which clearly reflect people's lifestyle both positively and negatively we should assert the need observing the precarious outcome of it for the rise of a risk free society in the future.
Technology reduces the effort of people which provides countless visible techniques to simply the work. It is conspicuous that from paper clips to ultra-modem space crafts work on the principal of science and technology. It made life way to easier gave us some many fruitful outcome in the field of medicine, science , communication, transport genetics and engineering; as a result we increased life expectancy, made space travel possible and done some many complex permutations in a millisecond.
However, at the same pace technology bring treat to people; for instance , the inventions of weapons specially nuclear war gadget are extremely dangerous for the existence of the entire life form on earth. In addition to that, an increase use of motor vehicles causes the contamination of our ecosystem which resulted in certain problem such as global warming.
The appropriate use of technology by taking the positive effects can bring about great changes in our life styles. By promoting global peace by anti war campaigns can counter the use of weapons. Also making awareness in individuals about the hazardous fuel emission from automobiles can be instrumental in avoiding threats associated with global warming.
In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of science and technology purely depend upon the way we carry out them. Let's hope for a world without enduring the dangerous outcomes of these inventions in near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34200743494 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98330298097 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639405204461 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4118116067 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 104.977214359 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0792991942884 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293541670931 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305247353262 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421764215327 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01426547927 0.0609392437508 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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