technology
The effect of technology, which was always debatable, has now more controversial. The substantial influence of technology has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on labor-saving over the years. It can be agreed that humans have benefited from achievements of technology. This essay will elaborate how technology improved the quality of life and it also made life more complicated and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there is a myriad of reasons why technology has improved human life but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that the considerable achievements of modern technology have facilitated human works both on domestic activities and in the workplaces. As an illustration, with a washing machine, instead of spending hours for doing laundy, housewives can use this time for relaxing or taking care of their children. Thus, people would have enjoy more in their life.
Nevertheless, there remains some drawbacks, which can overwhelm the potential influence of technology, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact that while saving time for certain activities, people, on the other hand, spend too much time on other technology products, such as smartphone, play game devices. For instance, vacuum machines help people reduce time on cleaning houses, in contrast, they waste hours on surfing the internet for social networks such as Facebook. Therefore, in general, people may feel they have less time due to technology devices
In conclusion, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, I believe that the advantages of technology overweight its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...their children. Thus, people would have enjoy more in their life. Nevertheless, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32824427481 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94492300892 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.2785949682 50.4703680194 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 7.25397266985 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264786234006 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992460390991 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109609588082 0.071462118173 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175059582781 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196710157831 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 12.6369458128 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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