Work from home has become increasingly common in recent days. There are many arguments for and against home working. However, the most people believe that work from home is the better options. This essay will discuss the reasons why home working is, in fact, more better than the workplace.
The home office or working from home gives benefits to employees. One of the greater benefits can be balanced work and life. For example, people timetable their daily activities on their own because home working is relatively flexible. Therefore, those who work from home could be more flexible to manage their own time.
Working from own home has many positive impacts on people. Working parents can get much better advantages if they can work from home, do not need to travel to other places. For instance, working parents can schedule their work during the school hours only thus they can pick their children on time after school. This could be the greatest benefit for the parents.
This essay has discussed some of the benefits regard with work from home in lieu of travelling to offices in other places. In my opinion, this provides employees flexibility and can decrease parental burdens, therefore, working home is much better that travelling to work every day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...e reasons why home working is, in fact, more better than the workplace. The home office...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the greatest benefit for the parents. This essay has discussed some of the ben...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e parents. This essay has discussed some of the benefits regard with work from home in ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tter that travelling to work every day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03317535545 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30265432302 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 139.433497537 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4268161932 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8571428571 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.9669160288 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.25397266985 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0074827409949 0.242375264174 3% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0031305712711 0.0925447433944 3% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0112874352394 0.071462118173 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00499922657063 0.151781067708 3% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00865891441888 0.0609392437508 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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