Is television a form of entertainment or information? Discuss your views.
Nowadays, watching television has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question ‘whether the television is a form of entertainment or information?”. It is a widely held view that the TV set as an educational device is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that the television an educational device plays a vital role in the fast-changing world. Therefore, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that TV is include of a wide variety of educational programs in terms of medicine, technology, politics, and economics that contribute people to raise their public awareness. Secondly, it can be argued that individuals are able to be informed of the latest news, such as natural disaster or weather condition immediately. In addition to this information, a group of reporters, working at a prestigious organization conducted that students will have this opportunity to promote their cognitive knowledge and cover their studies by beneficial TV programs.
However, there is no doubt that watching television as an entertainment device provides people with various points. It should be taken into account that TV consist of an extensive range of sports program, which encourage people to have regular exercise. Moreover, the advertisements are able viewers to purchase their basic demand with reasonable price without any time-consuming.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that television as an educational device must be taken into consideration in order to promote people’s knowledge. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...owadays, watching television has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
... idea. First and foremost is that TV is include of a wide variety of educational progra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44329896907 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31068937527 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 379.143842365 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6233465302 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.25397266985 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116588131492 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418451871415 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676330867202 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751042480177 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539429683113 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 12.6369458128 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 53.1260098522 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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