Television shows and its impact on society.
There is an ongoing debate among intellectuals regarding the Television and its various impacts on society. In this regard, some protagonists assert that different shows telecasting on TV has positive impact on society whereas antagonists censure this notion. They profess that these programs can put negative impact on the peoples. All the sides of this notion will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs in order to deduce reasonable outcome.
Protagonists who opine that television will help the intellectuals to positive things substantiate their point by citing that it helps them to get the information about the things happening around them. Firstly, some TV shows are based on the academic information and help peoples to understand the common hurdles of the education. This will provide them the information about technical and analytical information. Secondly, some of the programs are based on the crime shows that will not only help the society to learn about various threats in the surrounding but also make them capable to tackle this issues.
However, there is another group of people who profess that these shows can leave a negative influence on the denizens. They support their logic by saying that these programs have negative content in them. Firstly, some of these shows have violent content in them and are full of fighting scenes. Young generation usually learn from these programs and try that in real life. This will not only cause accidents but also increase the crime rate in the society. This will further drop the country’s image on international level.
At the end recapitulating the whole discussion, it is conceded that these shows have both positive and negative impacts on the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 20.9802955665 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27075812274 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74655464318 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512635379061 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6314601701 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238046108817 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799958531727 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100877970914 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167013895663 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941426510077 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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