Does television removes our loneliness or not? Discuss.
The television is a go to media for all age groups of all time even with the advent of technological evolutions in recent days. There are many supportive points that highlights the positive side of television such as, it has removed loneliness with few disadvantages. In this essay, more details will be discussed before arriving at a conclusion.
Firstly, television is not only a media for entertainment, but also it aids kids of different ages in learning about universe, animal kingdom along with other fun filled entertainments such as cartoons. For example, many children are fond of their favorite characters and learn moral values from these channels. Apart from this, they entertain many kids during their lonely time when their parents are busy with their works.
Secondly, it became the widely spread medium in transferring news from any part of the World within a few minutes. Also, a person can learn about different regional programs of other non-native countries and can learn their language by watching those programs. In recent days, most of the elders prefer watching series and the fictional characters have become their part of the family in every house. Even young adults prefer their favorite characters of these series.
Though the advantages are more, it always comes with other end of the double edged sword where, more people waste their time unnecessarily by sitting in front of such tiny box. Some watch these unrealistic characters and are becoming mentally sick by getting addicted to those series.
In conclusion, though it has merits and some demerits, it is always with the responsibility of an individual who watch these television programs.
So, it is always wise to choose best out of it to make one's time efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a (media)' or simply 'media'?
Suggestion: a (media); media
...ion. Firstly, television is not only a media for entertainment, but also it aids kid...
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Line 10, column 56, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...s wise to choose best out of it to make ones time efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 288.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13888888889 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74767543447 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3435983752 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0829336574009 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300850171186 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537056419041 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452899478244 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683490651771 0.0609392437508 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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