There are a lot of inventions nowdays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life. What are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
Recently, the phenomenon of the most important invention and its corresponding Impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the number of the important devices is highly rewarding, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that some modern inventions can be a plus, and I will analyze throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, the modern technology can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the technology researchers, as well as new the computer equipment, are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the computer software. Thus, beneficial ramifications of the recent innovations and the information technology apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of the social development, the creative imagination might exacerbate the already catastrophic consequences of the digital era. Moreover, fundamental aspects of the latest technology related to this reality that demerits of the computer industries pertain to the modern technology. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by some prestigious research has asserted that the downside of an electronic equipment is correlated negatively with a clever device. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of some useful technology.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of an important tool far outweigh its cons. Not only do the advantages of the new equipment prove the significance of the digital technology, but also pinpoint the modern gadget implications.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'electronic equipment'.
Suggestion: electronic equipment
...earch has asserted that the downside of an electronic equipment is correlated negatively with a clever ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68773234201 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25513457586 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 379.143842365 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0023436813 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0880524037717 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293061573614 0.0925447433944 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323237785322 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516736635238 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368329176386 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 11.5310837438 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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