There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
The implication of several problems associated with the use of mobile phones, which is fairly debatable has now gained further attention from the numerous arenas. The sizeable influence of this subject has generated controversy over the potential impact of this trend. I believe that the problems of the mobile phone outweigh the benefits of mobile phone but there are so many benefits of the mobile phone and this will be further discussed before reaching a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are diverse reasons why this subject is considered as vital, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that firstly mobile phones made for connecting peoples each other but present time the mobile phones used for other purposes like spending time online on social media. And on social media peoples do so many unusual things. Secondly, there are some technical problems like so many news come from all over the world that mobile phones blast and peoples injured.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that the several problems associated with the use of mobile phones can be addressed with some positive facets as well as there are innumerable facts in favor of that, but the most predominant one steams from the facts that mobile phones is very useful thing for every person and there are several benefits of mobile phones like with the help of mobile phone peoples get information from everywhere.
In conclusion we can say that the mobile phones is very important thing to every person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ere are some technical problems like so many news come from all over the world that ...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...ere are some technical problems like so many news come from all over the world that mobil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05490196078 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41562261184 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505882352941 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.883805113 50.4703680194 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.125 104.977214359 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 20.9669160288 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43436507944 0.242375264174 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186391078931 0.0925447433944 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117066500717 0.071462118173 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261148720895 0.151781067708 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102709177581 0.0609392437508 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 12.6369458128 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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