The Government reduce their investment in arts, music and painting agree or disagree
The importance of government reduce their investment is arts, music and painting which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that now days many movies and arts is increasing day by day which is more fine. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that 2017 in one movie is release Singh is king many things learn from her movie and 80% people do like movies. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that many people do like movies but the arts or movies is not best in human life because there are so many sides effects of arts or movies. Besides which this arts do same children do 60% copy same away with this put effects on study and daily routine. Hence, it is apparent why many are against trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of arts or movies because with this development of country are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97472924188 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56550969249 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8506397718 50.4703680194 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666756129105 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264158031017 0.0925447433944 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876113074243 0.071462118173 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427291708169 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740090948202 0.0609392437508 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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