There have been many life changing advances in the last century. Which is the most important invention of the past 100 years the cars or antibiotics?
Support your point of view with details from your own point of view.
It is evident that how life has changed since the invention of many things has introduced in human life. There are many exceptional advancement have taken place over the last century. This essay will argue that despite the remarkable contributions cars have made, antibiotics are the most indispensable invention of last century.
Undeniably, car has made the life easier for all in terms of transportation. Since the car has introduced in human life, it has provided the people with ease of convenience to travel anywhere and irrespective of time. For instance, people has now started living far from cities also just because they own car and can travel to the city in need of emergencies. It has also lead to the development of proper road infrastructure. But, the invention of cars can not be considered so important just for it avails ease to travel.
However, the invention of antibiotics is indeed an indispensable invention of the last century. Evidently, antibiotics has eradicated numbers of diseases in human history since it is invented. For example, Malaria, Chicken pox and many more diseases have been eradicated with the help of antibiotics. Therefore, we can say that antibiotics are really the most imperative invention of the last century.
This essay has argued how the invention of cars have truly served the human being in a materialistic sense, albeit antibiotics have proved to be a life saver. In my opinion, antibiotics is indeed the more indispensable invention of the last century than cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advancement seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much exceptional advancement', 'a good deal of exceptional advancement'.
Suggestion: much exceptional advancement; a good deal of exceptional advancement
...has introduced in human life. There are many exceptional advancement have taken place over the last century....
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Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'contributions'' or 'contribution's'?
Suggestion: contributions'; contribution's
... will argue that despite the remarkable contributions cars have made, antibiotics are the mos...
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Line 3, column 373, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
...ity in need of emergencies. It has also lead to the development of proper road infra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 249.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13654618474 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0392718855 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0777414426 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3571428571 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283411816769 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10246386177 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540868475769 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183203903203 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639880061004 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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