Throughout the great part of the 16th and 17th centuries, the Catholic Church feared ideas that they considered to be a heretic because they did not agree with the Bible. Their fear was so big that they persecuted scientists who formed theories the Church

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Throughout the great part of the 16th and 17th centuries, the Catholic Church feared ideas that they considered to be a heretic because they did not agree with the Bible. Their fear was so big that they persecuted scientists who formed theories the Church considered heretical and banned people from reading any books on those subjects by including them in their list of prohibited books. This triggered a type of battle between science and religion. There would be more casualties on the side of science.

Two scientists who printed books that later became banned were Copernicus and Galileo. Copernicus didn’t suffer persecution during his lifetime because he perished in a short time after publishing his most controversial book. However, Galileo was judged by the Inquisition following the publishing of his book. Both men of science supported the same theory that the Earth revolved around the Sun, a theory known to be true. But the religious institution disapproved of this theory because the Holy Scriptures state that our planet is at the center, not the Sun. Since the Bible was taken literally, the publishing of these books “confirmed” to the religious institution that Copernicus and Galileo were sinners: they seemed to teach through their writings that the Bible was wrong. In one of his books, On the Revolutions of the Heavenly Bodies, published in 1543, briefly before his death, Copernicus states that the Sun is at the center and the Earth revolves around it while rotating on its axis daily. It’s also worth mentioning that Copernicus wrote in Latin -just like all the other well-educated authors of the times, which only educated people could read, effectively minimizing the number of readers to a select few.

The Catholic Church ideas that they considered to be a heretic because they did not agree with the Bible, moreover the Bible was taken literally, the publishing of these books "confirmed"to the religioous institution that copernicus and Galileo were sinners, besides this other well educated authors of the times, which only educated people could read.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, moreover, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 20.9802955665 29% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 31.9359605911 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 308.0 1207.87684729 25% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 55.0 242.827586207 23% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.72326981533 3.92707691288 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39839534326 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 46.0 139.433497537 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.836363636364 0.580463131201 144% => OK
syllable_count: 98.1 379.143842365 26% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6551724138 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.5024630542 268% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 50.4703680194 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 308.0 104.977214359 293% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.0 20.9669160288 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.0 7.25397266985 317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 6.9802955665 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269979194985 0.242375264174 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.269979194985 0.0925447433944 292% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.071462118173 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269979194985 0.151781067708 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 12.6369458128 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.27 53.1260098522 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.54236453202 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.9458128079 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.53 8.32886699507 138% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 55.0591133005 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 34.5 9.94827586207 347% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.3980295567 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.5123152709 228% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.

Rates: 22.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 90
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