Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the world. Over a billions adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high – for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke or are such decisions are up to individual?
The packet of tobacco itself says that it is extremely dangerous to health and causes cancer but then also people are consuming it blindly without bothering about themselves and their families. Billions lives have been trapped in the arms of tobacco all over the world.
Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the world. Over a billions adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high – for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity. According to last census, it is evidenced that in average, four people died a day because of tobacco consumption and no. of deaths are increasing day by day which is a serious issue of the society. It is not true that government is not making any strict laws for this complication but the implementation is not in their hands. People are blindly exploiting the laws without having a thought in their mind that these rules are meant for their benefit. Many movements like Anti-Tobacco Programme initiated to stop the growing and use of this fatal drug, but people caught in addiction, endlessly growing and lengthening the roots of this drug.
In conclusion, tobacco not only kills a person physically but also economically which creates deep impact on his family. At last, the crucial role of government and individual’s effort must goes in parallel to cut the roots of this weed. So, tobacco is not a need, but a useless weed.
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| 2019-05-03 | rockpte | 77 | view |
| 2018-04-25 | RAHUL BHARDWAJ | 55 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a billion'
Suggestion: a billion
...st widely-used drugs in the world. Over a billions adults legally smoke tobacco every day....
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acco is not a need, but a useless weed.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87109375 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.745065597 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57421875 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6997555949 50.4703680194 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9230769231 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 7.25397266985 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475303805744 0.242375264174 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15269755231 0.0925447433944 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161541330376 0.071462118173 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243498718787 0.151781067708 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.21032652235 0.0609392437508 345% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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