Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the world. Over a billions adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long term health costs are high – for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of health care costs and lost productivity.
Do governments have a legitimate role to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke or are such decisions are up to individual?
tobacco consumption is a deep-rooted issue which requires a resolution. it is used in various forms and most popular way to consume is in the form of cigarettes. this essay will discuss how it the combined responsibility of an individual and the government to curb its consumption as it is deleterious for health.
consuming tobacco can lead to serious illness, so it is an individual responsibility to gradually reduce its consumption. The deadly disease such as cancer is caused by tobacco. World health Organisation(WHO) submitted a report which shows tobacco as the 25 per cent cause of deaths among the age group 30-50. In short, eating tobacco is harmful to people and leads to multiple illnesses, hence its consumption must be monitored by the individual.
In addition, the government also plays a vital role, it should ban all advertisements promoting tobacco consumption. There are many organisations, which sell their tobacco product with the help of flashy advertisement which allures people. For example, many advertisement show consumption of tobacco increases your chances of being successful. Overall, the government should make strict legislation to stop these misleading advertisements for tobacco consumptions.
this essay discussed how people and government can together fight a war against tobacco and will eradicate this humungous threat upon an individual. In my opinion, efforts done by an individual and the government will surely bring change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, so, for example, in addition, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53744493392 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2678971137 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8168141226 50.4703680194 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.6923076923 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175349547771 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068005859829 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379779562228 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106774369605 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495381671843 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.